Please comment on my Love sonnet?

sonnet usually have 3 quarters and ends with a couplets r 3 secects which ends with couplet. the ryhtm created by you in the sonnet is not at par, read the sonnets of shakespeare, petrarch, sidney, spenser etc and get the right idea for writing any sonnet. further you can also refer to http://www.literaturetutor.webs.com here you will find highly educated professors of literature who will help you in writing more creatively